I'm waiting for the starlight, seeking solace in the warm depths of the evening sky, while glossing over the bygones of the day. My mind is overwhelmed with voluminous memories that have been!
A silent breeze swishes the leaves of a peach tree parting them to reveal the fruits that are now intensely yellow. Birds begin their roosting call, chirping in plentiful monotones, while moths seek the last vestiges of light, unknown to themselves, if they'd last another day!
The cold melancholic air has a certain charm and brings forth dusk with its golden hued twilight. With it comes a sense of calm that has to be savoured in all its elements, slow and steady - pretty much a feeling that has to be invited to slowly sink in.
The elegance of nature is truly unparalleled and the mind is racing in exuberant bliss while the body is composed and still. Some contradictions, it seems can never be comprehended.
Gone too soon, I'm left with the feeling that dusky twilights are akin to eclipses, arriving in much fanfare and departing in obscured quiet - unannounced! Dotted twinkles of a few stars in the horizon assure more scenic demonstrations in the offing. Pleasant aromas of freshly brewed tea fill the air, in random staccato bouts, leaving the mind to decide upon the wanton cravings of the tongue.
But silence is even more addictive and impresses upon me to stand by, and relish the proceeding of time to savour some of the finest moments in life - those, if once lost, would never heed a call to turn back in time!
Some of the most blissful things in life, I've realized, are elementary!
Excellent post Rakesh.
ReplyDeleteTime, we cannot race with. Cos with Time, we r always BEHIND.
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**The elegance of nature is truly unparalleled and the mind is racing in exuberant bliss while the body is composed and still. Some contradictions, it seems can never be comprehended.
I like how u put it.
Kesho.
Don't have much to comment about. Beautifully expressed!
ReplyDeletethere is no substitute to beauty...ur words are just that...beautiful
ReplyDeleteGreat writing.
ReplyDelete//Some of the most blissful things in life, I've realized, are elementary!//
The above line says it all. :)
Nice flow of thoughts :)
ReplyDeleteawe... it carry us on bliss and presence of nature. It sense beautiful bro!
ReplyDeleteThat was poetic Rakesh !!! Now that has two meanings - one, its beautiful and the other, I didnt get a thing !!! :D :D :D
ReplyDeleteJokes apart, wonderful write up ! How I wish one day I would be able to write this way !! Sigh ! I dont see that coming in another 50 years though ! :D :D :D
hey....i read this 4 times...not bcoz i din understand this..but I just wanted to byheart some of ure sentences...they are so goood to copy and use it somewhere else..!!hehe
ReplyDeleteyes indeed. Your observation strikes a chord with me. Very wise!
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ReplyDeleteWonderful words written Rakesh
Its the true ...
VERY TRUE!!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written
you described them beautifully...
ReplyDeletemost precious things are indeed the simplest and most easily found....
I loved this post. Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteBtw, yesterday (15th) was my birthday.. so yes we are Virgoes :)
Fantabulous words...
ReplyDeleteYou seem to have all it requires to make a great writer!
Fantabulous words...
ReplyDeleteYou seem to have all it requires to make a great writer!
Most of the blissful things in life are elementary indeed! Hey, why don't you try writing poems? Your writing style is poetic!
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity
Keshi
ReplyDeleteGood to see you! Hope you are doing well!
Yes, as you said, we cannot race time for we always find ourselves lagging behind!
Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it!
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Rakesh
Neeraj
ReplyDeleteThanks very much! Glad you liked it!
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Shahid
ReplyDeleteWow - This is one awesome compliment, though I find myself undeserving!
Thanks much!
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Rakesh
Aditya
ReplyDeleteThanks very much!
Yes, I do believe that some of the most blissful things in life are elementary!
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Rakesh
Deepak
ReplyDeleteThanks very much!
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Jeevan
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! Hope you are doing well!
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Vimmuuu
ReplyDeleteU being a singer, I thought, should understand poetry better!
Thanks very much for your compliments budd - means a lot to me, though, like I said before, I feel undeserving for me!
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Rakesh
Rahul S
ReplyDeleteLol! You are free to use it any place you feel my friend! ;)
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Abstract Scientist
ReplyDeleteThanks mate! Appreciate the connect and the compliments!
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Anya
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! Glad U liked it!
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Survivor
ReplyDeleteThanks much! Glad you liked it!
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Rahul
ReplyDeleteThanks very much! Yes, indeed - the best things in life are the most elementary!
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Rakesh
Aria
ReplyDeleteThanks very much!
My pleasure! Hope you had a wonderful on 15th!
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Rakesh
Suji
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! Truly appreciate your comments and visit!
And for being a writer - wow! Interesting prospect - but I believe, a long way ahead!
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Rakesh
DI
ReplyDeleteThanks very much!
Yeah, I guess I need to compose some poetic lines too! :)
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Rakesh